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A0640 grammar error?

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#1
On the flavor text for A0640 (208) on the Wave1 shipping of the 2nd Kickstarter, I think there is an error in grammar, specifically:
"It is as if the canyon is moaning in pain, the sound of which filling you with unease and sending a shiver down your spine." should be "...the sound of which fills you with unease and sends a shiver down your spine." or "...the sound of which is filling you with unease and is sending a shiver down your spine."


Edit: Oops, wrong forum. I'm an idiot.
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#2
No, i don't think it's an error. I'm rather sure i read such kind of language more than once in literature.
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#3
Not egregious, but yeah, that's an error.
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